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Overwhelmed

This world is too much for me.

Its demands are suffocating, they squeeze,

the air out my lungs,

grasp my veins,

so that the blood stops flowing.

The words other people utter,

are nothing but meaningless, trivial thoughts that deafen me,

scream through the tunnels of my ears, tearing the hairs to that point where it’s not

enough to remove, but just enough to cause pain as if they’re being ripped out over

and over and over and oh god, it’s all too much.

They stare and laugh and argue and my body shudders in response. The

neurostimulation I desire is non-existent – nobody understands that my heart aches

not for another person, a soulmate, a love so strong that it could overcome the world

but for freedom, breathing effortlessly without having the air catch at the back of my

throat as I choke on the collection of my own saliva that refuses to trail my

oesophagus no matter how much I swallow. It’s painful, so painful, the dull ache that

follows me regardless, fills my stomach like wet concrete fills a pathway but the

cement never dries. It slips and slides around my insides, furthering discomfort within

until my legs cave in on themselves and I’m left crouched on the floor, dirt

surrounding me and everyone else above me, looking down as a physical form of

hierarchy. They ask, “are you alright?” like a stranger in the street does and it makes

me roll my eyes, an action so pathetic and hate-worthy yet unstoppable because

after all they’re all so clueless and the question in itself is more of a statement, an

acknowledgment of new presence in a room, and not a genuine care for another soul

and their well-being, and the word “smile” is the worst word I’ve ever heard, I want to

choke the word to death so that it’s never uttered again and my faceless face

remains happily solemn without your unnecessary evaluation. What gives you the

right to evaluate my life? For the love of God, you’re nothing but flesh and bones

rotting ever so slowly, destroying the earth some more just like the rest of us. How

dare you tell me what I’m worth? And simply because my right and left brain don’t

communicate correctly, or maybe my muscles don’t receive the messages, so my

cheeks remain flat and colourless, lacking the usual upturned corners decorating

flush lips. Instead, bloodshot eyes scar my face and blistered ink mixed with old

wounds scatter my arms, adding to the overall disarray of my moods which fluctuate

between desperate and depressed. And I’m sorry, so sorry that I don’t satisfy you

because I can’t fake a smile. I dissatisfy myself too.

– Morgan Adams


This piece was written as a spoken word poem.

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